Please review the text in the OFBiz download page

[Jacopo Cappellato-4]

This is mainly a request for committers that are native English speaker: today I have edited/cleaned a lot of information in the download page:

http://ofbiz.apache.org/download.html

could you please review what I wrote and improve the English?

Thank you,

Jacopo

[Anne Jessel]

I can't find a way to log in and change it myself, but my suggested
edits are trivial:

"where YY and MM are the year and month of when the release branch was created"
should be
"where YY and MM are the year and month the release branch was created"
(drop "of when")

"Major Release Number is created every year on April"
should be
"Major Release Number is created every year in April"
("on" becomes "in")

"<Minor Release Number> is a two digits sequential number"
should be
"<Minor Release Number> is a two digit sequential number"
(singular, not plural, for "digit")

Cheers,
Anne.


On 27 February 2012 00:46, Jacopo Cappellato
<[hidden email]> wrote:

> This is mainly a request for committers that are native English speaker: today I have edited/cleaned a lot of information in the download page:
>
> http://ofbiz.apache.org/download.html
>
> could you please review what I wrote and improve the English?
>
> Thank you,
>
> Jacopo
>

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[Jacopo Cappellato-4]

Thank you Anne; I have committed your corrections with rev. 1295109
The site should publish them in about 1 hour.

Jacopo

On Feb 29, 2012, at 6:56 AM, Anne wrote:

> I can't find a way to log in and change it myself, but my suggested
> edits are trivial:
>
> "where YY and MM are the year and month of when the release branch was created"
> should be
> "where YY and MM are the year and month the release branch was created"
> (drop "of when")
>
> "Major Release Number is created every year on April"
> should be
> "Major Release Number is created every year in April"
> ("on" becomes "in")
>
> "<Minor Release Number> is a two digits sequential number"
> should be
> "<Minor Release Number> is a two digit sequential number"
> (singular, not plural, for "digit")
>
> Cheers,
> Anne.
>
>
> On 27 February 2012 00:46, Jacopo Cappellato
> <[hidden email]> wrote:
>> This is mainly a request for committers that are native English speaker: today I have edited/cleaned a lot of information in the download page:
>>
>> http://ofbiz.apache.org/download.html
>>
>> could you please review what I wrote and improve the English?
>>
>> Thank you,
>>
>> Jacopo
>>
>
>
>
> --
> Coherent Software Australia Pty Ltd
> PO Box 2773
> Cheltenham Vic 3192
> Phone: [phone]
> Fax: [phone]
> Web: http://www.cohsoft.com.au/
> Email: [hidden email]
>
> Bonsai ERP, the all-inclusive ERP system
> http://www.bonsaierp.com.au/

[Jacques Le Roux]

From: "Anne" <[hidden email]>
>I can't find a way to log in and change it myself, but my suggested
> edits are trivial:

FYI: you have to be committer

Jacques

[Anne Jessel]

Ah yes, thanks Jacques. And Jacopo even said his message was aimed at
committers, which I missed. Sorry.

Cheers,
Anne.

On 1 March 2012 03:47, Jacques Le Roux <[hidden email]> wrote:
> From: "Anne" <[hidden email]>
>
>> I can't find a way to log in and change it myself, but my suggested
>> edits are trivial:
>
>
> FYI: you have to be committer
>
> Jacques



--
Coherent Software Australia Pty Ltd
PO Box 2773
Cheltenham Vic 3192
Phone: [phone]
Fax: [phone]
Web: http://www.cohsoft.com.au/
Email: [hidden email]

Bonsai ERP, the all-inclusive ERP system
http://www.bonsaierp.com.au/