svn commit: r958029 - /ofbiz/branches/release09.04/README

[adrianc]

Author: adrianc
Date: Fri Jun 25 16:34:19 2010
New Revision: 958029

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=958029&view=rev
Log:
Updated the README file.

Modified:
    ofbiz/branches/release09.04/README

Modified: ofbiz/branches/release09.04/README
URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/ofbiz/branches/release09.04/README?rev=958029&r1=958028&r2=958029&view=diff
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--- ofbiz/branches/release09.04/README (original)
+++ ofbiz/branches/release09.04/README Fri Jun 25 16:34:19 2010
@@ -1,18 +1,18 @@
 
 Welcome to Apache OFBiz!
 
-If you have a release build all you need to run OFBiz is a 1.5 series
-JDK (not just the JRE, the full J2SDK).
+This release requires the 1.5 series (or later) JDK
+(not just the JRE, the full J2SDK) to run.
 
-However if you have downloaded ofbiz from SVN then you should
-load the demo data (strongly advised) with the following command
+Before you can use OFBiz, it must be built and the demonstration
+data must be loaded. To do that, type the following command
 on the command line:
 
 ant run-install
 
-Once that is properly setup just run the executable jar file
+Once that is done, run the executable jar file
 that comes with OFBiz, which is ofbiz.jar. To do this on the
-command line you would run:
+command line you would type:
 
 java -Xms128M -Xmx512M -jar ofbiz.jar
 
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ For more details about running a build,
 getting, building, and running the source please see the
 Apache OFBiz Setup Guide:
 
-http://docs.ofbiz.org/x/rwM
+https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/OFBENDUSER/Apache+OFBiz+Business+Setup+Guide
 
 Note that running with the default configuration uses an
 embedded Java database (Apache Derby), and embedded application
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ server components such as Tomcat, Geroni
 To prepare OFBiz for production use the Basic Production Setup Guide
 is a great place to start. It is available here:
 
-http://docs.ofbiz.org/x/j
+https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/display/OFBTECH/Apache+OFBiz+Technical+Production+Setup+Guide
 
 For additional resources please see the OFBiz web site.